Actions From Rough Cut Feedback

After hearing some input from my classmates and friends i decided to take action and make some changes to my video. Also it was evident to me tat some changes were needed. 

These were the changes i made:

• I made the video longer as it is now 3:04 minutes. I did this by having more filming time and filming shots such as the traffic scenes.
• I also added some more shots to add to the theme of a journey to make it a little more clear.
• I also edited some of my filters to make it more effective to watch.